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Early preview of the writing for section 3. (Spoilers!)

This section focuses on Rachel and Juliet.


The section starts off with Brandon being tasked with helping Juliet find the final member needed to make Rachel's club official. He has a good candidate and seeks out Rosa, who thinks he is at her room for another reason. After misunderstandings are cleared up, she agrees to join the club after questioning about it. He takes the news back to Juliet at her room, where Rachel is also there. They're excited to hear the news and ask if Brandon could help them with some prep work before the festival, where Rachel needs some practice for her maid cafe event.

Juliet decides to help her through the process, showing her how to properly walk and handle things. Later after their training is completed, it's getting late and so Rachel decides to head back to her room.

The choice to follow Rachel or stick around with Juliet shows up. I don't want to majorly spoil things, but there is a "big" unlock revolving Rachel and there's something similar for Juliet. Before the section ends right before the festival begins!

-Writer notes-


-I believe this section was about 3300-3500 word count.

-There was supposed to be a moment where a mini game or more choice involved moment for hunting down a club member took place. But sadly it felt a bit too much for the section.

-I think fans of Rachel or on the fence will begin to notice the difference in how she speaks is clearing up a bit by bit, which is intended. Even if you dislike Rachel, I think it's worth trying to unlock her big unlock in the section.


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