Comic Update - 7/19/18 (Patreon)

Apologies for the slow progress on Jouigi's comic. So far I've only done 3 pages. I feel like I'm ready to continue now that I revised the story draft. Criticism is welcome; here's the link to the revised draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dWK2yJf_K6FffQsDVeYHVcakxuLXCJFZBinF0U0qh6Y/edit?usp=sharing