Helluva Trio pg 94 inks (commentary) (Patreon)

The final round begins. Who will win?

I decided to tweak the dialogue here from the script. Loona's scream was changed to become muffled, as her face is buried in the bedsheets. And Millie's line was originally "break this bitch," before I changed it to "tame her."

Upon reflection of the reaction of the readers, it seems the audience is a little against Millie for being a rougher player than the other two, so I'm guessing people would feel like she hadn't learned her lesson if she returned to the dirty talk so soon. But "tame her" still sells the idea that they think their sexual experience will pleasantly overload Loona's mind.