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Predators of Denali - Page 19 HD (Patreon)

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2018-07-18 11:01:00
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Link to Predators 2 folder, valid until page 20 is done:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/s0o58anrdqhvz1w/AACU0J5s4Gf_4ktQ4ilGgmyPa?dl=0

Page 19! Trying to best convey the movement of Bailey's tongue without getting too busy. I redid the effects and stuff on this page a few times to keep it clear and consistent with effects on previous pages. I like when a character just 'sits down for a bit' and laps/sucks/etc repeatedly letting the other squirm, so that's what I was shooting for here. Also added a frame not present in the sketch. 

I hope the page flows okay, I'm indecisive and self-critical of that, lmao. I hope you all enjoy this one, thank you for supporting it so far~

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C-Fed

This page flows nicely and the dialogue, though minimal, is very fun. I adore the close-up shots the most! The amount of detail in them is just right as to not be too confusing, but to also convey a strong amount of feeling. Overall, frekin' fantastic work on this piece. Especially considering it's the second comic page this month!

Anonymous

So good. Ah loves it. Lesbomancy is strong with these ones.

Antoine Davis

This is pretty good, the dialogue is pretty good, i also really like the added frame that you added in from the sketch. Also yes the page does flow pretty well, can't wait till page 20.

Anonymous

I really appreciate that you do a mix of closeups and a wider view.

Anonymous

Sooo hot

LifeWulf

I'll admit I had trouble figuring out if the left panels came before, after, or during the big right one. But, I'm also in desperate need of sleep, so that might be on me. Regardless, it doesn't stop my enjoyment of the page!

Kenith Fox

This is pretty hot I guess. I am anticipating some big ram dick to make it more my kind of porn interest.

Kenith Fox
>>13930994

If you stare at it a bit, you can figure it out. First, Tala asks Bailey why she stops, then Bailey is like "hold my beer, I'm gonna yeet this bitch over." Then, Tala says, "Oooo... Aaaah, F...f..fudge, that's good!" Finally, Bailey exclaims, "You know it!" You can't see it, but Massak is watching in the bushes fapping and wispering to himself, "Golly, I wish I had the balls (I mean I do, but not those kind of balls) to just tell that bear girl that her clothing is floating away."

fluffkevlar
>>13930994

Yeah, that's what I worried about, but at the same time, figured it was okay, since the left 3 panels don't -necessarily- need to come before/after the main panel. I mean, story-wise, they don't deliver any new information so I think it's passable, but would like to avoid in the future. Thanks!

fluffkevlar
>>13926578

Thanks! i do try and do that throughout my comics. Sometimes taking a step back gives a bit of a breathing room.

Not Telling
>>13932840

I mean, I signed on for the ram on wolf action as well, but I'm really appreciating the attention to character development. It gives it a nice contrast with the original.

ChromeFox

Mmmf, those close-up panels are just too good~ :9