Predators of Denali - Page 10 HD (Patreon)

Page 10! The first few panels made this page take longer than I wanted. I'm full of excuses. I mean I also re-worked a lot of the page. If you recall the original sketch, I think it was rushed, a bit "jumpy" from one area to another, and some panels oddly crammed. I'm much happier with this steadier layout, and think it starts to sell the story a little more. 

I just want to be entertaining! Haha. Part of me feels bad that it's much more buildup than my previous comics. I promise it won't take 30 pages to get there. I just need to find out down the line if buildup makes it better. Thanks for your feedback and support through all this!