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Archived: spoils of war (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2020-09-10 17:52:03
Edited:
2021-06-24 20:35:34
Imported:
2022-04

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boinkboinked666

yes please! looking forward to this and also your orc series!

Anonymous

Secondly, it is the facial expression. The 13th picture ruins all impression of your work. The facial expression of the woman is silly and funny on that last picture. Frames 4, 8 and 9 are good example of an attempt to put some real emotions on the female character's face.

Anonymous

Firstly, it is the image resolution. The picture could show more details on the background. It should be wider. I saw this mistake in your previous works like "Payback", for example. Such narrow images are used only for close views when you want to pinpoint the attention upon some specific places or actions. Frames №4, 10 and 11 are good examples of close view in the narrow picture. All of the others frames shoud show more background. I'd suggest putting camera away from the characters (this will increase the camera angle) and decorate walls with some interesting things, like corpses, guts, bodyparts pinned against the wall with swords or knifes.

Anonymous

Nice set. It can be described as cruel, brutal, hot. We can see here nice exposition, dark and bloody scene, very hot points of views (especially close views like picture №4). Everything could be absolutely good but there is a spoon of tar.